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ENDLESS REMINISCENCE

Met through a chum, noticed at sight

Behind her back, exchanging bytes

Started with a laugh, leading to a flirt

Thousand miles apart, yet close at heart

***

Unreachable moments, made me forlorn

Waiting to see online, became the norm

Defying the situation, yearned to be together

Every moment treasured, in the cyber shelter

***

Journey back home, never got bored

Entranced in daydreams, over the globe

Sending short messages, back and forth

First prolonged kiss, delicacy and warmth

***

Ill-timed text message, insecure boyfriend

Losing all that mattered, despair descend

Yet no remorse, with abounding appetence

Cherishing the memories, in endless reminiscence

—————————–END—————————

Guys… that’s my first poem. I would love to hear your say.

Cheers!!

Hammett

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Comments

  1. Shanu says:

    Really cool and oh so familiar.. 🙂

    I am all nostalgic now,its amazing how things are hardly the way you imagin them to be.. but as u said.. its all about not having regrets and cherishing the moments..

    Hail Hail!

  2. hudhuhandhu says:

    summed up the norm of “modern” relationships 😉
    cool poem..
    keep em’ comin.. 😀

  3. Hammett says:

    thanks a lot guys…
    cheers :))

  4. Nightmare says:

    yo! hammet cool blog you got here

  5. Neobe says:

    i liked the last line :>

    THE END

  6. kukulhu says:

    so who is that on the other side of that window…..im anxious to know that…you might want to think on the vocabulary next time….for a poem

  7. bulhaa says:

    awww…sad story…
    i liked the poem. agree with hudhuhandhu

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  9. RannamaarI says:

    whoa man u r awesome…. keep it commin man 🙂

    -necrophagus.wordpress.com-

  10. Hammett says:

    nightmare: Thanx…

    neobe: yea.. i liked that line too 😛

    kukulhu: wud take ur advise.. girl huh…

    bulhaa: sad dhoa… thanks

    anonymous: uh??? ur intense curiosity dhoa…. hehe..

    rannamaari: thanks man.. would try…
    thanks to all of u who read it…
    cheers!!